2020-07-06 15:10:08
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在雅思写作考试中，考生如果写文章一直都是一种模板，大众型的开头结尾，这样的写作分数自然也高不上去，那么接下来就跟着小编来具体了解一下**讨厌的十个雅思写作开头吧。 在雅思写作考试中，考生如果写文章一直都是一种模板，大众型的开头结尾，这样的写作分数自然也高不上去，那么接下来就跟着小编来具体了解一下**讨厌的十个雅思写作开头吧。
六、语法错误不断
讨厌指数：三星半
涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性，语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。
比如：
写作主题
If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?
案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.
七、意思反复重复
讨厌指数：四星
反复重复一个意思，让*会觉得你并没有什么可以表达的，或者词汇表达能力有限，自然也会扣分。
比如：
写作主题
Your opinion on DINK families
案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
八、观点*化
讨厌指数：四星半
考生在使用语言描述事物或者表达自己的观点时，应尽可能避免语言过于*化，更应该注意该语言中非*化表达方式的学习，这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。
比如：
写作主题 1
The importance of confidence
案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
写作主题 2
The solution to the traffic problem
案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
九、内容过分简单
讨厌指数：五星!
*想给你打分都没有内容，所以切记开头不要只写一两句话。
比如：
写作主题
The importance of environmental protection
案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
十、用词不当
讨厌指数：五星!
用词不当会暴露你的词汇，而且评分标准中谈到“在不同的语境中，使用正确的词性;”所以在使用词汇的时候，正确性也是非常重要的。
比如：
写作主题
Should college students be allowed to get married?
案例：I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
想知道自己更适合学习哪个小语种吗?一起来测试一下吧!
以上就是关于*讨厌看见的十个雅思写作开头，希望以上内容能对大家的雅思写作水平*有所帮助!*后，小编预祝各位考生早日考试成功!
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