6.1*节的雅思考试似乎对烤鸭宝宝们也不太友好,那跟随上海朗阁教育余曰简老师一起来看看这次的解析和范文吧!
06-01双边讨论类大作文社会话题-环*话题
Humanactivitieshavenegativeeffectsonplantandanimalspecies.Somepeoplethinkitistoolatetodoanythingaboutthisproblem.Othersbelieveeffectivemeasurescanbetakentoimprovethissituation.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
题目大意:
人类活动对动植物产生负面影响。有人说采取任何措施都为时已晚;而其他人说可以采取措施改变这个情况。双边讨论并给出你的观点。
思路:
双边讨论题目,建议在讨论双边观点时,都分析各自的合理性,而不要去写各自的坏处,*后再给出自己的观点,即单边支持一方或中立。
在双方立场针对同一话题对立时,在论证时尽量对双方观点有明确的限定,如甲方的观点是具体在怎样的前提下才是合理的,而再其他前提下,则是乙方的观点有道理。避免因为描述模糊而导致矛盾或观点的不清晰。
《剑-14》test1正好有一篇*范文,涉及同样的话题,其中个别观点,可以搬用到这篇文章中。
审题,找出关键词:
toolatetodoanything:甲方认为采取任何措施都为时已晚(即在分析甲方这一观点的合理性时,可以举出具体的客观事实或公认的真理,来*为何没有办法)
effectivemeasurescanbetakentoimprovethissituation:乙方认为还可以采取有效措施,弥补问题(论证乙方合理性时,也要提出具体可行的建议,强调其对拯救动植物的有效性)
范文
Itistruethathumanactivitieshaveexerteddetrimentaleffectsonplantsandanimals,withconflictingviewsonhowtocurbthistrend.Whilesomepeopleregardittoolatetotacklethisproblem,Iwouldagreewiththeargumentthattherearestillsomemeasureswecandotoconservetheenvironment.
Ontheonehand,itiseasytounderstandwhysomepeoplearepessimisticaboutthefeasibilityofsolutions.Thereasonsleadingtothedesperationisthatsurvivalofthefittesthaslongbeenruleinthenatureforcenturies,meaningthatitisfutiletoreversethetrend.ThepastdecadeshavewitnessedvariousattemptsbeingputforwardbymanyNGOs(non-governmentalorganizations)withexpectationtosaveendangeredspecies,thesadtruthisthattheydolittlehelptochangetherealityontheground.Onecompellingexampleisthedeathofthelastwhiterhinointhiscenturyregardlessoftheenormouseffortandmoneyinvestedintheconservationproject.
However,Isupporttheopponentswhobelievethatitisnottimetobedesperate,whiletherearepracticalmeasureswaitingtobeimplementedtoreversethetrend.Atadministrativelevel,thegovernmentcouldinitiatelawstorestricttherelentlessexploitationofnaturalenvironment.Bydoingso,thehabitatsofavarietyoffloraandfaunacanbepreserved,whichallowsenoughlivingspaceforwildlifetosurviveandbreed.Forindividuals,peoplecouldstopbuyingproductsmadefrompreciousanimalsorplants,whetherthesebecrocodilebagsorartefactsmadeofivory.Wereitnotforthedemandforsuchproducts,thehuntingandpoachingwouldbemitigatedtoalargeextent.
Inmyopinion,althoughitistoolatetorevivethewildlifethathavealreadybeenextinct,therearestillalotwecandotosaveotheranimalsandplantsatrisk.
相关词汇:
Detrimental 有害的
Curb 遏制
Pessimistic 悲观的
Futile 徒劳的
Relentless 毫无节制的
Exploitation 开发
Floraandfauna 动植物
Habitat 栖息地
Poaching 捕猎
Mitigate 减轻