雅思大作文的开头段之转述题目

2022-08-30 14:45:02 来源：网络 作者：朗阁小编

我们来讨论雅思写作大作文开头段转述题目的写作方法。雅思写作分为四段式：开头段，两段主体段和结尾段。开头段有两个目的， 提出话题和表达个人立场。提出话题，我们可以通过只描述背景或者只转述题目的方式，也可以描述背景和转述题目同时使用。转述题目可以有两种方式，句式替换和同义词替换。在转述时，只做句式替换，或只做同义词替换均可，当然句式和词同时替换就更好了。

我们来讨论雅思写作大作文开头段转述题目的写作方法。雅思写作分为四段式：开头段，两段主体段和结尾段。开头段有两个目的， 提出话题和表达个人立场。提出话题，我们可以通过只描述背景或者只转述题目的方式，也可以描述背景和转述题目同时使用。

转述题目可以有两种方式，句式替换和同义词替换。在转述时，只做句式替换，或只做同义词替换均可，当然句式和词同时替换就更好了。

所谓句式替换，就是调换主语。英语有这样一个神奇的现象，通过调换不同的主语，可以表达类似的含义。调换主语考查的是同学的语法能力。

同义词替换需要强调一下，千万不要逐字替换，那样难度很大，而且替换准确度也会很差。我们先考虑按照主谓宾定状整体成分去替换。这样替换量很大，表达更准确，更能向**你的词汇能力。

我们先看*个例子。

题目说Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. ,

我们就只用同义词替换。建议大家*好不要逐字替换，我们把主谓宾等成分整体替换。

看这样的转述：Professionals working in the field of science and technology enjoy more respect than artists or musicians.。

题干的主语Scientists and technology experts换成了Professionals working in the field of science and technology，

谓语核心be more valued 换成了enjoy more respect。

我们再看第二个例子。

题目是说Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 题目有两方对立观点。

核心动词是youngsters getting involved in unpaid work年轻人做义工。

如果题目是类似这样的两方观点，我们可以用这个句型去替换：People have different opinions about whether sb should do sth. While some people insist that it is beneficial for them, others argue that it will hurt ….意思是人们关于是否某人应该做某事有争论。有人认为这事对他们有好处，但有人认为这事伤害了…..。

我们这个题套到这个句型可以得到People have different opinions about whether youngsters should get involved in unpaid social work. While some insist that it is beneficial for young people, others argue that it will hurt their career prospects.。

此处只是句式上的变化，并没有太大的同义词替换。

我们接着看第三个例子。

题目说Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?在线购物越来越流行，我们可以在网上买书，飞机票和生活用品。

这个题目当中出现了such as 对名词的举例。大家也可以记住这样一个规律，如果题目出现了such as / like等的举例。

大家也可以把题目的一句话拆成两句话去转述。

比如，本题，我们可以先同义词替换转述Buying things on the Internet is becoming more and more popular转述一句，然后再把, such as books, air tickets and groceries, 这个举例写成另一句话。

本题我们可以改成Online shopping has become exceedingly popular over the years. For many people, the internet has become a one stop shop where they can buy everything from books to travel tickets. 我们拆成了两句话，*句是使用了同义词替换。题干的主语Buying things on the Internet改成了Online shopping，题干的谓语is becoming more and more popular改成了has become exceedingly popular over the years。注意时态也发生了变化。第二句such as books, air tickets and groceries根据理解可以写成“很多人们在网上可以买到书、票和生活用品”。此处做了更长的补充For many people, the internet has become a one stop shop where they can buy everything from books to travel tickets. 对于很多人来说，网络已经成了一站式商店，在那人们可以买到书，票等。

我们再看第四个例子。

题目是Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic and professional perspectives. *正面临来自学业和职业的压力。

我们判断题目当中出现了举例，对压力的举例。

所以我们还是把题目拆为两句话转述。

题干的Children are facing more pressures nowadays改成Children are under tremendous pressure these days. 。用了同义词替换。题干的谓宾部分are facing more pressures改为are under tremendous pressure，状语nowadays改成these days。

举例部分from academic and professional perspectives根据理解可补充为句子They are required to excel in their studies and have a brilliant career once they grow up. 其中academic 同义词替换成了excel in their study，professional 改为have a brilliant career。

*后我们再看第五个例子。

题目是Some people like to live alone in some countries. 很多国家有人喜欢单身。

题干很简单。在转述题目时，有一个句式大家一定都很熟悉，那就是there be 句式。但是大家一定要注意there be 句式很容易写成双谓语的错误句子。

此题我们可以改成Over the last few decades there has been an increase in the number of people who prefer to live alone. 再过去几十年里，选择单身的人数越来越多。

大家要注意，句中定语从句who prefer to live alone 的关系代词who千万不能漏掉。漏掉句子就出现there be 和prefer两个谓语了。