托福独立写作审题范例

2019-04-20 01:08:15 来源:网络 作者:yawen
今天小编要和各位小伙伴介绍的是托福独立写作审题范例,想要了解的同学可以参考一下小编带来的这些内容哦!

  今天小编要和各位小伙伴介绍的是托福独立写作审题范例,想要了解的同学可以参考一下小编带来的这些内容哦!


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  另外,小编也经常发现题目中的单词全都认识,但是考生还是写偏题的情况。分析下来了解到,根本问题还是出在看题不仔细,题目中的关键信息、限定词汇没有重视。例如:

  In today's world,the ability to cooperate well with others is more important than before.Do you agree or disagree?

  这个题目中的核心词汇包括cooperate以及than before。很多学生在行文过程中,都忽略了对before这个词的解读。全文都在谈如今合作有多么重要,而没有与过去为什么合作不那么重要进行对比。

  再如:The car has had greater effect to society than the airplane has to.Do you agree or disagree?

  以下对一位同学所写的段落进行分析:

  First and foremost,there are more alternatives to cars. Automobile is a kind of short-distance transportation,which is used mostly in daily life but also cause some problem like traffic congestion.Therefore,in order to solve the serious traffic problem,the government implements a gamut of proposals,encouraging people to take other transportations,to name a few,railway,bus and subway.Subway,for specific example,was quickly accepted by the public and spectacularly convenient.Intensively developing in recent decades,the subway attracts more people attributes to its cheap price and,especially,punctuality.To compared,individuals should pay the cost of gasoline,parking and maintenance for their private cars,which is more expensive than a two dollars’ subway ticket.Also,another perk of subway is that passengers will never be saddle with the problem of traffic congestion because subway always has its own lane.As a result,more and more people have the tendency to choose subway over privet cars.On the contrary,as the only long-distance transportation,air-plane,as a monopoly in the sky,does not have any alternative recently and has a wider improving spectrum in the future.

  大家可以看到,除了很多语言错误外,全段大篇幅在对subway进行描述,然而题目是需要考生将car和airplane进行对比。所以,写得再怎么多,都是不得分的,而因为这个问题失分,确实是特别可惜,又让人百思不得其解的。因此,小编建议大家拿到一个题目,先问自己一个问题,这个题目的话题词是什么?有没有对比信息?有没有限定词?并带着这些问题开始写作,这样才能避免写得多写得顺畅但是不得分的尴尬。

  以上就是小编为各位带来的托福独立写作审题范例,希望小编的这篇文章能够解决大家的疑惑哦!

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