托福写作满分范文和备考技巧

2018-12-03 05:05:14

来源：网络

作者：清妍

托福写作要拿满分，对于*学生而言还是可以争取一下的，毕竟我们比较强项的就是写作和阅读。但是也不是说每个人随随便便就可以拿满分，这中间可少不了大量的时间精力的付出。在此，小编为大家准备的两篇托福写作满分范文，大家可以琢磨一下别人的语句表达，用词语法等，然后学以致用。除了托福写作的范文以外，小编也整理了一些满分作文的技巧，希望对大家的托福备考有所帮助。

　　福独立写作题目原文：
　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　TPO10福独立写作满分范文：
　　Nowadays, most families possess more than one computer at home, and children are more likely to be exposed to computers at a very early age. And many computer games are aiming at children in recent years. Many people are concerned about this situation and they believe playing computer games is a waste of time. However, I disagree with this viewpoint and I believe children obtain many benefits by playing computer games.
　　First off, playing computer games offers children great platforms to get acquainted with more people and hone their communication and cooperation skills. For example, many computer games, such as World of War craft, require their players to set up teams and fulfill certain tasks. These kind of tasks can only be accomplished through good cooperation. So each player, including children, can have their communication and cooperation skills improved.
　　Furthermore, playing computer games could help improve children’s intelligence. It is because many of them, especially puzzle games, require their players to figure out possible plans and strategies to win the game; players are not able to upgrade to the next level only with luck. For example, when playing Angry Birds, you have to formulate a plan for shooting different types birds according the layout of your targets. So, by playing such computer games, children start to think, to plan and to carry out their plans.
　　What’s more, playing computer games can be a good way to relax. Nowadays, children bear greater pressure both from their study and life. For example, my cousin are forced to take various kind of training courses at weekends, which leads him to feel so anxious and exhausted. However, every time when he has time, he would choose to play computer games. He told me that by playing computer games, he can get rid of all the stresses and get fully refreshed. That helped him to resume studying with high efficiency the next day.
　　All in all, I draw the conclusion that playing computer games brings children more benefits than downsides.
　　以下“五大句法变化”技巧，助力考生轻松达到满分要求：
　　1、强调语气。强调的方法数不胜数，这里以句子倒装为例，为考生*一些能够高频使用，且易学、实用的技巧。
　　使用“so that”句型可以替换逻辑连接词“because”,而“so”作为副词修饰形容词时可以倒装，增强语气、表达强调。例如：
　　Because they are relatively poor, they have to work harder for less money than the locals and then save it.
　　So poor are they that they have to work harder for less money than the locals and then save it.
　　反复练习之后，就会形成良好的习惯，一旦想要表达因果联系，就会想到使用“so that”句型，进而想到倒装句增强语气。
　　考生需要特别注意，强调语气不是命令，更不是威胁。大多数情况下，考生不是有意为之，但客观上却酿成恶果。例如：“You will get cancer, if you smoke!”
　　考生习作中类似的案例不胜枚举。此处禁止使用第二人称，更不要使用感叹句强调。考生要时刻提醒自己，判分的*是文章*终的读者，如果恰巧这位*是烟民，这句告诫就是对他赤裸裸的威胁和咒骂。此处宜用第三人称，所谓事不关己高高挂起，对任何人都没有妨碍。
　　2、反问语气。
　　反问语气的实质不是疑问，而是通过反问增强原句肯定或否定的表述。例如：
　　We can not understand the influence of technological innovation, if we don’t use the experience in the past.
　　How can we understand the influence of technological innovation, if we don’t use the experience in the past?
　　通过反问将原句中“我们不能理解”变为“我们怎么能理解呢”，增强了气势。考生在习作中适当使用反问语气可以使原本平铺直叙的语言变得生动活泼。
　　3、虚拟语气。
　　很多考生使用虚拟语气时非常头疼，条件太多、变化复杂是症结所在。结合多年的教学经验，这里建议考生牢记以下两类虚拟语气，灵活运用。
　　*是表反对意见。虚拟语气表与现状相反，主句、从句时态倒退一格（例如从句原本为一般现在时，倒退为一般过去时）。
　　If we adopted modern agricultural technology, there would be much pollution.
　　上述表达使用虚拟语气，其真实意图是反对使用现代农业技术，不希望这种状况在现实中发生。
　　第二是表建议。某些特殊动词后接宾语从句表达建议时要使用虚拟语气。
　　I suggest drivers pay a large sum of fee when there is a lot of traffic. Meanwhile, I recommend the government improve traffic facilities.
　　使用这些特殊动词时，考生务必注意之后的宾语从句中使用动词原形。
　　4、插入语
　　如果考生经常阅读语言地道的英语文章（例如纽约时报、经济学人的评论员文章等），就会发现英语母语使用者通常会将一些表示逻辑关系的副词或短语放在句中做为插入语，以增强语感，使语言更生动、更地道。插入语的使用也非常简单，考生只要将通常用于句首的副词或短语插入句中即可。例如：
　　Art, in addition, gives the students an outlet for expressing their turbulent emotions during puberty.
　　这里将原本置于句首表示并列关系的短语“in addition”，做为插入成分放在句中，使语言发生了微妙的变化，增强了语言的律动。
　　5、情书体。
　　类似于“甄嬛体”，情书一样的神表达可谓“普大喜奔”。在备考过程中考生的聪明才智发挥得淋漓尽致，*终形成了丰富多彩、情感奔放的表达方式。
　　例如一位*考生用追女神的口吻描述他自己的高尚品格：
　　A genius never speaks about his own merits.
　　A genius would rather die than speak about his own merits.
　　再例如另一位*考生模仿“失去你的爱我就无法苟活(I can not live without your love.)”，描述了教育对青少年成长的重要性：
　　A teenager can not develop his body and mind without school education.
　　大家要记住一句话：你付出的时间和精力，可以印证你的成绩！大家要想拿托福*，关键还是在于孜孜不倦的努力。好啦，今天的分享就这样啦，咱们下篇文章在相见！