有的同学在托福写作时总是追求又多又繁，但这样只会让看的人又乏有累。小编在此就教教童鞋们让你们的文章减减肥，该瘦的地方就不能胖，这样才会让人读的每一句都有看点。
避免空洞的单词和词组。1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.
避免重复。1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.更简洁的表达方式为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
关于综合写作比较差的，其实只要综合写作能够获得满分，很多同学就可以达到27+或者更高的分数。这些学生明明独立写作很好或者还不错，但是由于综合写作不好，导致分数不理想。比如说听力单项在20分以下，甚至是个位数的，这个时候就一定要进行慢速听写，或者是重复精听或者是跟读。只要每天练习两星期到一个月，真正功夫下到了，听力就会发生质变，综合写作也会完全听懂。一旦综合写作的所有细节听到并且到近300字左右的时候，提分就非常容易了。另外我也会给同学一些技巧，比如说可以写一些总结性的句子增加字数，这也是给rater造成良好印象的一种方法。
小编能为大家做的只是收集一些资料给大家参考，真正要想考高分还得靠个人造化啦。
