今天的考试,比较难。
独立写作是一个政府类的新题。有些难度。
竟然问的老人, 有孩子的家庭,和失业的年轻人,谁更难. 政府应该给谁更多的资金支持... 简直是比惨大会啊...
但是,大家可以切入的角度非常多。所以也降低了难度。
综合写作,也是有些难度。出现了新的术语。
综合写作回忆
综合
阅读大概是说有一种鲸鱼叫Ocars还是Oscars的(名字记不太清了)数量在下降,可能有三种原因。
(1)有毒的chemistry
工业废水会排PCB在海洋里,这种物质会导致一些animal的reproduce能力下降。O的数量下降可能也是像这些animal一样受PCB影响。
(2)noise
watching boat发出的声音会影响鲸鱼echolocation的能力,所以它们就没法寻找食物了
(3)bacteria
有些致病的bacteria(举例了一个p开头的病菌类型)会让O得dangerous disease
听力反驳是
(1)除了文中提到的O(吃fish),还有其他种类的O,其他种类的O吃seal这种larger prey 。fish中的PCB含量要比larger prey的低,但是吃larger prey的O的reproduce能力却没有下降
(2)根据sensor和measure来看watching boat的声音和thunder storm一样大。因为O已经习惯了thunder storm的声音,所以echolocation不应该会被watching boat的声音影响。
(3)O本身可以抵御一部分bacteria的伤害。而且如果想要确定是bacteria让O数量下降需要更多证据 ,比如说被感染的肺(这里我记得是说肺怎么怎么样,不是特别确定说的是不是被感染)。但是这种证据很难获取。
独立写作分析
政府要提供extra financial to support a certain group of people,. 下面哪类人最需要政府的资助(most deserves and need get financial support from government):
1. 不工作的older people (70岁以上
2. 年轻有小孩small children的家庭
3. 暂时性失业的年轻人workers who recently lose their job.
(2). “下面哪类人最需要政府的资助-- 比较3个选项哪个最困难+最需要钱
(3). 三选一,每个选项的分析
1. 不工作的older people (70岁以上
--①已经退休没有工作收入了。②老年人一般身体不好+患有比较严重的疾病,所以需要额外的资金支持来支付医药单,看护人员等等的费用。
--不需要的原因:①老年人都有退休金和年轻的存款;②还有子女照顾他们。
2. 年轻有小孩small children的家庭
--需要的原因:①他们的经济负担确实很重,包括房贷,车贷和小孩子的学费,照顾生病在床的老人等。②他们的收入也相对有限。尤其是有些家庭的妻子可能需要放弃工作来照顾孩子,家庭收入就更少了。 ③政府多给资助,这样做可以鼓励年轻人多生孩子。
--不需要的原因:①年轻夫妇都很容易找到工作,收入就可以负担整个家庭的开支。比其他2个group的经济状况好很多。 ②并且他们的收入还会随着工作经验的增加而显著提升。
3. 暂时性失业的年轻人young workers who recently lose their job.
--需要:没有收入,可能生活很艰难—被房东赶出,..
--不需要:①暂时失业,可以通过积蓄过一段时间;②失业保险;父母朋友的救济;③可以激励年轻人努力去提升自己,找到工作。
中间段1:Those young families with children shoulder the heaviest financial burden than the other two candidates. Beside daily expenditure, they also have to pay the big mortgage for a bigger house to accommodate the family, afford expensive additional tutoring to improve their children’s position in the queue for a better school(写作团day1素材), or cover a huge medical bill if a parent happens to be in a sickbed. The heavy burden is very likely beyond the reach of a young couple who are struggling to makes ends meet(day10素材). No wonder my wanderlust(旅行癖) friend gives up traveling after his first child was born, leading a frugal life now. …
中间段2:Admittedly, the old above 70 necessitate a large amount of money to support themselves. Without income, they may also suffer from serious illnesses, such as heart disease, obesity, diabetes, resulting in large medical bills. Lacking the ability to take care of themselves, they may have to live in a nursing home. However, they in fact may be better off(富裕;境遇好) than the other two groups. Having worked for many years, the old often have substantial savings on deposits. What’s more, they can choose to live with their offspring.
中间段3:The government should not be concerned by those unemployed young people. Admittedly, losing their job at the 20s is not a blessing, they may be kicked out of their apartment by the landlord for a rent long-overdue, and skip meals to save money. However, this period of hard life may drive them to reflect on where goes wrong and work harder to avoid fall into the same situation again.